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Simplicity

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I tried to keep it minimal but full of content. Comments appreciated!


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D-Ejkiewicz
Too much White space kills it in my opinion. Setting elements like the "what we do part" makes them not fit in together. Same goes for the top. Even making the "Simplicity" name a LOT bigger would help out. I think you simply just spread out everything too far apart making the viewers eyes go around and he/she can't get a full focus on any of the elements. I would suggest some tweaks and this can be nice.